All Comments on 'Me and Mrs. Smith'

Great story. Can't wait to see more from you!

The young lady has much to teach her neighbor. You have us wondering what kind of things will be taught? Maybe the young lady is a connoisseur of toys and other forms of naughty play that she can teach.

Nice. Short, but sweet. Keep writing!

Lovely!

The outline is good, but I'd advise getting an editor to help tidy this up: the text is rife with typographic errors and there are a lot of run-on sentences.

And, then...AND THEN??

I love itso far but I want to read more as uts so beautiful! Thanm

Well done! I hope to read more from you! I enjoyed Lizzie taking charge in this story verses Mrs. Smith. That was a nice and refreshing change of pace!

Very nice, well contrived and constructed. Interesting how Lizzie stepped up with the firmer hand but make absolutely sense. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Good story. I think you could for a longer story with more of a sensuous building of passion and pulse.