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Click here"Are you with me Jessica?"
I looked at her when she said; with face so close to me,
"I was saying that I know you want to follow Mike, but that will be a mistake,"
A mistake how dare she says something like that, following my god is a mistake! This woman is surely a non-believer.
"You have 4 kids to take care, 4 kids who just lost their father and they will need their mother beside them,"
I looked at her again, 4 kids? Yeah I had 2 other babies in my womb, so I have 4 kids now.
The woman patted on my face and said,
"Jessica, I know you are a good mother, if you don't want to live for yourself at least try to live for your kids,"
The words echoed on my head, yes I should live for my baby gods, after I put them to safety I could go to meet my god.
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cageysea9725about 1 year agoIgnore the person telling you to get an editor. They are an idiot.
You don't need an editor. You need an education.
I don't believe you have any other languages besides English. You're just illiterate. Go build a house without using any tools. That would turn out as well as the vomit you put on this website.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoI'm not going to rate this because I can tell English is not your first language. However if you have an editor rewrite the story correcting all of your mistakes it might become a four star story. You should remove the story and resubmit it after extensive editing.
