by saraceleste
Brilliant, this flows so well and draws the reader in. Simply stunning in realism.
Tess (uk)
Short and sweet. Not a dynamic I am usually interested in, but I like his personality and you set it up so well!! It took me a little while to realize she was a she... at first I assumed (whoops) she was male... was that intentional that you were non-descript that way? Anyway, brief, nice consent, let the party begin!! Well done.
Oh helpful comment - I didn't realize the protagonist reads as a male. Helpful! The next chapter should be a little more clear. :)
Awww. Cuteness overload. At least at the moment. ;) I'm liking this Dom already. He shows a good balance between authority and empathy. I'll be a happy camper for the next chapters so please, gimme more. Meow!