All Comments on 'Me, the Master and Kitten Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Brilliant, this flows so well and draws the reader in. Simply stunning in realism.

Tess (uk)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Short and sweet. Not a dynamic I am usually interested in, but I like his personality and you set it up so well!! It took me a little while to realize she was a she... at first I assumed (whoops) she was male... was that intentional that you were non-descript that way? Anyway, brief, nice consent, let the party begin!! Well done.

saracelestesaracelestealmost 2 years agoAuthor

Oh helpful comment - I didn't realize the protagonist reads as a male. Helpful! The next chapter should be a little more clear. :)

TalkSexyToMe2029TalkSexyToMe2029almost 2 years ago

Awww. Cuteness overload. At least at the moment. ;) I'm liking this Dom already. He shows a good balance between authority and empathy. I'll be a happy camper for the next chapters so please, gimme more. Meow!

MaydaypilotMaydaypilotover 1 year ago

Wow. Deviously masterful. Wow.

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