All Comments on 'Mean Girls of Maplewood Ch. 19'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Finally!!!

After reading this I kinda see where your original 19 went off the deep end. Dildo with the spike is too much for me. This version is better and I gave you 5 stars.

TerraKhanTerraKhanalmost 5 years ago
MARTH! MARTHA!! MARTHA!!!

Chocolate Lavender and Martha when are we going to see them in action again?

Jimmyrag72Jimmyrag72almost 5 years ago
Nice

Very good chapter. Looks like the redacted ch.19 would have been very bloody. Thanks for making a great series keep up the good work Mondotoken.

inflmarainflmaraalmost 5 years ago

Can't wait to see where this ends up. I am love it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Holy shit

Dude! I'm both horrified and intrigued... if they ever make a movie out of this I'm there.. keep this thing going... I'm seriously going to need counselling later but I need to read this to the end lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Strap on screw

How is the screw situated in the strap on of April’s?

Wachirabol69Wachirabol69over 4 years ago
Update soon

Please write a new chapter and post soon. Thank you very much!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
New chapter

This is a wonderful story. Please update soon. Thank you very much!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Next chapter/unredacted ch./questions

Great work! Please do follow this up with the next chapter, as well as the unredacted chapter 19 somewhere.

Also, do you have any other planned "spinoffs" or cameos for Red, Leslie & Humbert, et. al.? Patty and Chelsea have a "spinoff" and April has one in Bad MILFs. And are you willing to tell us or at least hint at what happens to whatever Leslie and Humbert have?

mondotokenmondotokenover 4 years agoAuthor
Next chapter/unredacted ch./questions Great work! Please do follow this up with the next chapter, as well as the unredacted chapter 19 somewhere. Also, do you have any other planned "spinoffs" or cameos for Red, Leslie & Humbert, et. al.? Patty and Chels

Yes.

Wachirabol69Wachirabol69over 4 years ago
next chapter

Please post chapter 20 soon. It would be great to see Leslie finally getting Humbert to be with her

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Still waiting!

Hey man

It’s been ages since a new chapter came. Would be quite exciting if Leslie is left with no option but to blackmail Humbert to be with her and thus succumbing to her dark side once again

mondotokenmondotokenover 4 years agoAuthor
Still waiting! Hey man It’s been ages since a new chapter came. Would be quite exciting if Leslie is left with no option but to blackmail Humbert to be with her and thus succumbing to her dark side once again

Working on it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Update

Please write and post the next chapter soon. I would love to see Leslie blackmailing Humbert to be with her, going back to her evil nature.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Chapter 20

Please publish the next chapter very soon. Thank you very much for this wonderful series. I would love to see Leslie blackmailing Humbert into being with her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Next chapter

Really exited for the next chapter. Thank you for writing this amzing series

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Update

Please don't keep us waiting and upload chapter 20. But if we're going to wait, please give us the original chapter 19 somewhere.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Poor Humphrey

Something tells me hes gonna pegged for a whole page. Theres a reason why hump is in his name.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
wait another 3 years to finish this 10th grade writting project

writing quality has been getting progressively worse, wouldnt be surprised if aliens and fairies started showing up. If you want to read good femdom/kinky stories look up the artist inCase (extremely talented, and regularly posts, unlike this hack).

mondotokenmondotokenover 4 years agoAuthor
wait another 3 years to finish this 10th grade writting project writing quality has been getting progressively worse, wouldnt be surprised if aliens and fairies started showing up. If you want to read good femdom/kinky stories look up the artist ________

Sorry, I couldn't let you plug your own work in my comments section.

It's a free country, thank you for reading and voicing your obvious frustration with the upcoming 20th chapter. I'm doing this for free and the next installment or post will be Mean Girls of Maplewood Ch. 20 FYI. I'm not that easy to manipulate and I have a life outside of this site.

Been finishing up story arcs lately and working on the future. Feel free to peruse other stories if you don't like what I have. Thank you for the comment.

I WON'T STOP WRITING & I WILL NOT BE DISCOURAGED.

Happy Holidays 2019

mondotokenmondotokenover 4 years agoAuthor
wait another 3 years to finish this 10th grade writting project writing quality has been getting progressively worse, wouldnt be surprised if aliens and fairies started showing up. If you want to read good femdom/kinky stories look up the artist ________

Hack, seriously?

Definition:

A hack writer is a pejorative term for a writer who is paid to write low-quality, rushed articles or books "to order", often with a short deadline (Wikipedia).

Sticks & Stones, baby.

December 2019

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Don’t listen to those bullshitters

And please release chapter 20 asap

Jimmyrag72Jimmyrag72over 4 years ago
New Chapter?

When do you think the new chapter will be out?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Next chapter

Please post the new chapter soon. Thank you!

Wachirabol69Wachirabol69about 4 years ago
Next chapter

Still waiting for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Please post the next chapter

I'm really excited to see how things will be between Leslie and Humbert after this,

Wachirabol69Wachirabol69about 4 years ago
Next chapter

When's the next chapter coming?

mondotokenmondotokenabout 4 years agoAuthor
Jimmyrag72- New Chapter? When do you think the new chapter will be out?

Submitted it on my birthday: Apologies to all of the people waiting for the next chapter. I wasn't going to post anything else before this 20th chapter of the series.

Let's keep our fingers crossed that it clears the censors.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Original Version of Chapter 19

Love your work Mondo, was wondering if there is a way to read the original version of chapter 19?

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