All Comments on 'Meena Lost Her Luggage Pt. 01'

The title and title description showed promise. As for the rest, best forgotten. Even allowing for both the likelihood that English is not your first language and that it was your first story, it was still painful to read.

Thank you for the feedback. I will try to improve.

The moment where Meena finds out the shirt had two buttons missing is naughty. Please add more of such moments in the second part.

It would serve you well to learn a bit about pronoun usage. Using Meena’s name five times a paragraph is too painful to read. You have a good title and description, got me to try it but the story itself was too painful to go past the first two paragraphs.