All Comments on 'Meet Me For Lunch'

Thanks for the read.

Using initials for names doesn't make it seem like you're hiding an identity. It's just lame and distracting.

Succinct, well edited and very sexy. Could have gone a little more into her - looks, personality, etc. But that's minor.... Also, somehow kind of accessible -- at a mall no less. Not a fancy cruise or something. Bravo, keep up the good work!