All Comments on 'Meeting a Newly Divorced Mom'

Would LOVE to know your thoughts as I submit Part 2

Absolutely one of the hottest stories I’ve read here. Please post Ch 2 soon!!!

Wow absolutely fantastic! Keep going! Can’t wait for the next installment

this got me so hot I love it can't wait to read part 2

I like it very much you did make one mistake Bella gave you her panties and then you said when she got up from the table she didn't have any panties lines, maybe because you had them in your pocket. Other than that very well told. Looking forward to the second part. Only reason I did not give you 5 stars.

That was good bro. Very smooth, you had them eating out of your hand. The slow seduction, letting them know they were safe yet super sexy and your interest. Cant wait to see how the night ends. I dont know too many dudes that can take care of two hotties like that the same night tho!

Hot

Just one slip! Bellas' g is in your pocket. 5*

Great Story. One thing - it's Foreplay not Fourplay.

I liked it for a great percentage; was perfect, but then suddenly a slew of mistakes every few words!

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Needs some minor editing, but very hot story.

Very well written. That's as erotic foreplay as I've read here. Needed some editing but minor details. In the continuity department, you forgot that Tanya had already taken her g-string off and given to Rick when you wrote as they are leaving the restaurant, "As she stands... I can tell whatever thong she is wearing...", which just means the segment probably wasn't all written at the same time. No big deal. You did a great job of painting that picture of the 2 hot women becoming wet. I'll bet the next segment is just as hot. Nothing more erotic than a hot milf with wet panties. Extremely hot!! 5 stars

I haven't gotten past the first sentence,

but need to comment: "One of the benefits of traveling often for work, are great locations, great restaurants, and meeting wonderful new people." That is not one benefit, that is three benefits. Other wording options: "Some of the benefits of traveling..."; or "One of the benefits of traveling is great experiences with new places, exotic restaurants, and interesting people." As others have said, an editor would be beneficial. :)

To bad you didn't finish writing the series as its been over a year and you never wrote Part 2. im not ranking this without a ending