All Comments on 'Meeting Her Parents - Pt. 01'

From your sub title...

"Their different, so what."

It's they're... not their.

And at the risk of being pedantic...you left out a question mark.

Doesn't exactly give a reader confidence in your mastery of the language.

Interesting story. Please continue. Just refrain male to male sex. Hope the women have pubic hair and not shaved.

Wonderfully hot and intriguing start. Can't wait for more!

Interesting idea. Looking forward to seeing where it goes.

More please!!!

While I don't normally agree with commentors named "Anonymous", this is one time Anonymous is correct. An editor from Literotica might be to your advantage.

Its great. Well written and intriguing. More please.

Amazing story hope to see it continue

Excellent .. 🤗 😘

Love the story. Great tension and buildup. I would recommend having someone edit your stories for spelling (ungulate is a hoofed mammal, shutter is a window covering). It just helps the story flow better.

encore!! grreat story. hope to see a lot more

Why is she so worried? Their different, so what.

*Why is she so worried? They're different, so what?

The narrative is nice. Dialog just needs to loosen up; they all sound too formal