All Comments on 'Meeting Jeff Pt. 01'

Can't wait till the next chapter :-)

Tell me more please your killing me.

Should have waited to post this until you got somewhere. As is, you’re just wasting your readers’ time. Won’t be reading any more of your stories, that’s for sure.

This is NOT a waste of time reading! What you have here whets the appetite in an amazing way! Jeff exudes sex appeal, and like Billy says, if Jeff gets "cleaned up" -- shower, beard trip, clean clothes, he will be a guy with outward sex appeal. Billy imagines Jeff;s cock and pubs bush; I imagine a hairy chest, sexy arms, thighs, legs, and predict a good time in bed for them. So anxious to see where you take this story!

Jeff is someone obviously in need of Billy's help. Can't wait to see what Billy is able to do with Jeff's appearance.. Keep writing please! You've got a real gem of a story here!

Too short, can't wait to hear where this story goes.

getting off to a good start here. Keep it coming!

And…. This wasn’t a whole chapter, very little happened beyond the most initial set-up. Please make longer chapters, and have some actual events occur besides story set-up and grabbing a bite after work.

Great start i am already horny just imagining the rest