All Comments on 'Meeting Lilac'

Very well done. Great to see from a fairly new writer. I kept waiting for it to be revealed that hubby was a regular lover of Lilac but maybe that comes in a sequel. One constructive comment, it was hard to follow the pronouns in some cases and know who was doing what with who. One paragraph became impossible to decipher.

Keep 'em coming, I followed you.

Dude, this was straight up dumb.

Bartenders are effing busy, too busy to engage in idle conversation. And why would his wife visit him at the bar? What was she going yo do, talk to him whike he’s serving drinks?

FFS, use your head for more than keeping your ears apart.

why isn't this in a lesbian category

Good story. Please keep writing.

@Whackadoodle

There are other jobs in a bar than just bartending. Guess we don’t frequent the same types of bar?

@Anonymous

Cause they’re bisexual? Sorry if it was confusing

@Odiouser

Thanks for the constructive criticism. I’m pretty new at this kind (or any kind) of storytelling so I appreciate your comment and hope to improve that.

If Odiouser likes it you know this sucks big time.

Odoreater liked this story, so we immediately know it's horrible. The worse the story, the higher the praise from Odoriferous, because it's the only way his stories look good in comparison. 2 stars.

Not a bad story. What guy wouldn’t love to have a bisexual wife? So hot.

Ignore whackdoodle. He can’t stand any story that doesn’t have a cheating wife getting murdered.

As for the category, it’s perfect as it’s a wife engaging in extra marital fun. No where in the category description does it say that fun can’t be with another female.

Sorry retread, the moment I read Odoreater loved this (bear in mind he loves gulping down other mens cum so take his praise with a bigly truck load of salt) I didnt bother reading it because, quite frankly, it has to suck.

Next time aim to get kudos from someone NOT in the closet clique, you might get some people to like it....maybe, hopefully, possibly.....nah, you couldn't do it.

A lot of errors as pointed out below by Whackdoodle but still very hot.

Odiouser says he couldn’t understand most of it, but as there are people of questionable morals in it, it’s all good.

Look how many times that our pathetic troll posted to this story. He used many of his accounts (whackdoodle, bh54,iammweasel, 26thNC) and posted anonymously as well. It takes a special type of loser to waste so much energy and the only person he’s impressing is himself. I love how he agrees with himself using other names.

Dude, give it the fuck up.

Wrong category. Belongs in the gay/lesbian category. Two stars.

YUMMY!!