All Comments on 'Meeting Sir'

Yeah, now I'll be waiting for chapter two!

This was amazing I'm excited for chapter 2!

This was erotic and the start of a good story. I, too, cannot wait for chapter 2...Off-campus??

First impressions:

"Thanks a bundle" cute language

"bring your warm body" strangely funny

"feel free to ax me anything" I don't understand why the word 'ax' over 'ask' is used - perhaps it's the professor's humor.

Nice, vivid language, lets the reader really feel themselves into what's happening and take the actions that the protagonist is taking.

Realistic.

Good conveying of his alphaness at the beginning of the story, setting the scene and mood.

Haha "Kaline", as if he's subtily calling her a dog.

"Just call me Jack", the ambiguous meaning which could have indicated charm by familiarity.

Good way of setting the submissive persona in the beginning (e.g. "lowered lashes").

Short and sweet sections.

He keeps calling her 'Kaline' incorrectly, though, as if he's trying to tease her or teach her a lesson.

Haha, the repeated "Yessir", so submissive and cute. The submissive nature is even more emphasized by portraying the protagonist as insecure. The best part is that it's set in a realistic setting,

allowing the reader to live themselves into the main character and get curious for more.

Such contemporary scene description, it's charming and it allows the reader to feel at ease and experience the writer's world.

The subtle nuances through the clever use of adjectives are brilliant.

You're a very romantic and sensual writer.

The naughty submissive nature makes me smile.

A big smile formed on my face as I read the nickname 'DaddyWants'.

Hmm, bratty submissive ("snotty professor").

I don't know if it's me or the writer.. but you use possibly sexual word slike "Jack" (off) and "a blast" (as in orgasm).

The increased brattiness in the story made me chuckle (Use of insolent language such as "the fuck").

Ohh, the qualifying language of DaddyWants in the beginning.. You can tell it's him.

"raining little kisses", my gosh, so poetic. I've never seen anyone write that.

Hot writing, so very hot.

A sweet and calm dynamic between her and the professor.

Looks like you wrote this story rather fast?

JH68.. Jack Holman.. indeed.

Your writing style makes me smile and chuckle often.. such a smooth dynamic between the girl and the professor.

The beautiful anticipation in the writing. You make the reader want to really kiss and touch Kaline.

You take such your sweet time with the build-up of the dynamic. It's charming.

Retrospect:

It was a charming and relatable little story, full of suspense and little notes of humor. A pleasant read.

It's also just unpredictable enough to keep the reader on their toes.

There's a special feeling in knowing they played online and then all of that translating to real life in split seconds as they meet eyes.

You have a good way of communicating situational emotions.

Everything in your writing just seems so familiar..

Errata:

"JH68: I think I have a girl one of my classes that resembles you" -> "in one of"

Rating: 5, loved it