by Myrph
Sometimes it is nice to read about the monstergirls being monstergirls, without all that fancy stuff.
Kind and warm story, thank you.
Is a really good romantic erotica monster girl story! Hope u make sequels, maybe involving the male exploring his sexual 'feminine' side when the Cowgirl permanently turns into a futanari! And hey, that way she'll be extra 'stressed' and he'll have more than one way to 'milk her'...
I really liked this story, it was really quite sweet and that scratches a common itch of mine. My only criticism is that perhaps you could have had more description about her monstrous nature. Maybe things like her having soft bovine-like ears for Barret to play with and/or enjoying running his fingers through the fur on her legs, or maybe be more descriptive in the way the joints on her legs worked when she got on top.
Like I said earlier, I really liked it and I think you write well, I just wanted to give some constructive feedback, I like when people do the same for me. (I write non-erotic fiction for a different site.)
I really enjoy the stories with the sweet endings. It's really satisfying when reading it.