by Myrph
I really enjoy the stories with the sweet endings. It's really satisfying when reading it.
I really liked this story, it was really quite sweet and that scratches a common itch of mine. My only criticism is that perhaps you could have had more description about her monstrous nature. Maybe things like her having soft bovine-like ears for Barret to play with and/or enjoying running his fingers through the fur on her legs, or maybe be more descriptive in the way the joints on her legs worked when she got on top.
Like I said earlier, I really liked it and I think you write well, I just wanted to give some constructive feedback, I like when people do the same for me. (I write non-erotic fiction for a different site.)
Is a really good romantic erotica monster girl story! Hope u make sequels, maybe involving the male exploring his sexual 'feminine' side when the Cowgirl permanently turns into a futanari! And hey, that way she'll be extra 'stressed' and he'll have more than one way to 'milk her'...
Sometimes it is nice to read about the monstergirls being monstergirls, without all that fancy stuff.
Kind and warm story, thank you.