All Comments on 'Mei Suk Yoo’s First Trip to America'

hero into a man instead of a piece of shit

gyrl hopes you try again. she loved the idea, and being an azian tried to imagine, but the action is weak. she would not be so stupid as this. The play on words with her name was a bit lame. Capture her, enslave her, pierce and collar her, and then set her lose, and gyrl promises to juice for you!

The basics of your story where promissing but the delivery was not. I feel that you tried to do to much. Keep it realistic.

Keep on writing.

Racist crap.

Love it but I would have liked to have read that they guys took her cherry.