All Comments on 'Melanie's Wet Dream'

It was gripping.. the sex was hot,steamy Mel is my fantasy woman... I am wondering where and how far she will venture out....

Looking forward to your stories...

Loved the story and especially the ending.

I think Daniel has learned his lesson.

A very good story.

The characters are believable and interesting and the erotic action nicely described.

I very much hope there is more to come form these characters and from this author.

I loved this! It is well written, vivid, believable, and extremely arousing!

Great job!

But I am left hanging why Daniel was such a limp dick for a year until that night. ED? Affair?

enjoyed the story. very good imagery. maybe they'll find more ways to spice up their life!

I really liked this story, the characters were true to life and the grammer was spot on, thank god... I bet that situation happens to a lot of couples after being married for a while. To answer anonymous's question you don't have to have E.D. to fall into this rut, just the same-old, same-old will do it as well.

What I see here is a lack of true communication, they were both more libidinous then they wanted the other to know about until it was discovered accidentally, which awakened his desire for what was there all along.

Good Job, keep em coming!

Very good first story. The action was hot, and I especially enjoyed how Melanie pleasured herself. Please share another story with us.

Love the build up and the raw emotion! Makes me hungry for more! ;-)

Love the raw energy & buildup in your story. Very steamy!

This sounds like what many of us have experienced... male and female.

I pictured the look on your face when the curtain opened.......and it made me groan a bit.*s*

Great story. I like the way you build the eroticism and then bring them together. I'm 52 and sex is better than ever!

Loved the build-up, the surprise, the ending.... Superb. Any very arousing!

great story. really painted a vivid picture. melanie is hot! really makes the reader feel like they are there watching.

Great story that is very stirring!

Wonderfully written. You paint an exquisite picture of intense desire and need.

Your descriptions are vivid, and very erotic. Nice story - it got me going! I'm 51 and have the opposite problem with my 47 year old wife. Wish I could get her interested in sex again!

I really enjoyed this, especially the range of emotions it invokes, from frustration, to desire, to erotic submission to her needs, to the hopefulness of reconciliation and rediscovery.

Well done!

I Loved the description and almost there sense. I enjoyed cumming to it.

Steve

Wow what a great story. Great to see the subject get a charge out of her hubby. I am going to try and take a bath in front of my wife tonight.

It's too bad that in real life, both parties think the other has no interest, this story is a great example as to how the interest both have (but it is not revealed) can be brought out into the open.... Well Done!

I love how it slowly builds at first, and then their combined passion explodes..... Lovely

Hot story! I loved it.

This is a terrific little story about fun both in the tub and out. And it's a pleasant reminder of how a happy ending can also be a happy beginning. Loved it.

I really enjoyed this for a quick read. It really exploded at the end. Well written, keep it up.

very hot and explicit. Would love to read more.

Love it! Nice work!!!

Thank you for the story. I thought that it was very good and it gave me plenty of images in my mind.

I can feel the passion inside you...

Love the description of the sex. Hard to balance the fury and pain with the passion and pleasure. Nice job.

Great story... keep writing, and I will keep cumming... back for MORE!!

very nice, thanks for sharing!

That one one Very Sexy Hot Story ,,thanks for sharing..xoxox

Great writing!

A very enjoyable and arousing story. I look forward to reading more.

Wow!!! What an arousing story. Very well written.

I loved the way this was written ... a shower dead works great on the tip of a hard cock too ... please write more!

I love a happy ending or two

A very good short, paced wonderfully. The descriptions and language were excellent. I felt fustrated right along with her. It was not predictable at all, which is refreshing. The appearance of the husband was well timed. I ran across your sig on a thread and thought I'd check you out. I'm glad I did.

~ABG

Keep writing, you definitely have talent... and a great way with words. Ace

You write well and love your imagination and the way you lace the words and bring them to life. You created very visual things for me with your style and you have a wonderful imagination. Please keep writing. Eddie

An amazing story and well presented. Quite captivating and the subject so realistic. If not, you convinced me!

Keep writing more... please.

xxx

A well-constructed tale, and such a sweet, happy ending! Keep up the good work!

Wow!!!! Where can I buy one like that-but with a Danielle? Love the build up, the suspense and then the fucking surprise. Do write more!!!

It is a wonderful thing when a woman can use a shower to bring a spark back. Thank you :)

Brilliant, The use of the water and hair brush to cause her own pleasure than to rekindle her husband. Brilliant..

This is a nice story with a good buildup. Could there be a touch of autobiography there?

Well written erotica. Left me feeling like a voyeur, craving the intensity of re-kindled passion.