by chistopherduncan
ooo yes, hope my beloved will fell the same if it will happen I have to left her to early
. . . that you need an editor, but “ post humorously” instead os “posthumously” was such a jarring mistake . . . .
Nor would the officers say that the fallen soldier would receive the Medal of Honor. That’s a very rare award, and it’s simply not decided upon that quickly.
You could use an editor, or just self check carefully.
upvote a faithful spouse story. warms my cold dead heart. there are some good people left, they are just rare, and usually paired off with shitty people.
I will treat it as eternal Romance....not bound by time zones
You lost me at the beginning. I am sorry for this comment on an otherwise well structured story. Purple Hearts are awarded to ANY soldier for ANY combat wound ,major or minor. Yes , one is awarded for death. It is not an award for a heroic act.
A little stiff, language stilted, but I don't recall anything quite like it in LW. Interesting take on a loving wife story.
Some effort to wring out the sympathy for veterans, but so maudlin, then freaky, that I can't imagine finishing it.