- Fetish
- Melissa's Regret
- Page 2
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Click hereDerek snorted out an agreement, without breaking eye contact with Melissa.
"At any rate," Warren continued, "We've been at a few... events together. I do know that Derek can be a bit more, umm, naturally dominant than me. And Derek, Melissa is... well, you've heard about Melissa."
Melissa heard Warren talking, but didn't take her eyes off of Derek. The silence began to feel oppressive. A waitress approached, but Warren waved her away.
Then Derek stood up and looked down at Melissa expectantly, almost demandingly.
"Oh, and Derek," Warren was saying. "Her safeword is 'potassium.'"
Derek continued to stare intensely at Melissa as he dismissed the older man.
"I don't believe in safewords."
Melissa swallowed hard and kept her own eyes locked with Derek's, as she reached out without looking, placed her fingertips on the keycard, and slid it across the table to him.
Apparently, she thought, neither do I.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous11 months agoWell, first, thanks are due to the muse who inspired you with her request … it has brought out the best in you. But of course the credit for the result is all yours. This story is simply superb, even by your exceptional standards. I am going to try, but probably fail, to hold off reading part two, so that i can enjoy rolling part one around the palate of my imagination, savouring its man subtle, intoxicating flavours and gracenotes.
Just as an aside, I normally ignore the kind of comments offered by mr anonymous below, but i can’t resist pausing to commend your very precise and unanswerable riposte.
Anonymous12 months agoHey Rimbaud17, what a well written, gripping, erotic piece. It had tension, sexual tension too, unpredictably and a dramatic ending. Fabulous, thank you
Rimbaud17about 1 year agoAuthorThank you, peasant001, for the supportive comments. But actually, I would suggest that the men in my stories who some would describe as "weak" are in fact men who are able to admit and explore their fetishes to immerse themselves in jealousy, submission, and humiliation. Some might call that admirable. Other men who have those fetishes limit themselves to reading about it online, masturbating furiously, and then channeling their self-loathing toward the authors.
Being the object of their scorn doesn't bother me. I'm not sure why toshiro75 is so obsessed with this thread. My earlier comment was toward an anonymous poster who read a story about three people contemplating extramarital sex, and chose to single out the woman for a slur. That suggests misogyny. Misogyny causes very real harm to very real people in this world. I will call out misogynists in my comments section. I hope toshiro75 wasn't motivated to comment because he sympathizes with anonymous.
toshiro75about 1 year agoPeasant001, it is really a stretch talking about some talents here on lit. It is much of one and done stories. I am curious why are weak mens here allways boyfriend or husbands?
peasant001about 1 year agoToshiro75, Rimbaud's stories include strong men to balance the weak ones. And his writing is enriched for it. His flagship story series has some compelling exchange between said men, and it is peak quality in its thoughtful delivery. Are you threatened by his talent?
