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All Comments on 'Melony the Futa Ch. 01'

by peggysue69

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

I like it, but I recommend some editing. It would help with the flow of the story.

peggysue69peggysue69almost 4 years agoAuthor
Where do you want it to go

I am still a little unsure where I want this story to go. Any good ideas? leave them i the comments please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Proof reading

Have you considered having someone proof read your stories because this one had a lot of problems and it required work to figure out what you meant.

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