All Comments on 'Mel's Adventures in BDSM Ch. 04'

I shall be waiting, have no fear! Please don't make us wait too long for more about poor Mel's situation!

Just blazed through all four chapters. I very much like the story so far. It is well written and the character development is coming along. I hope you keep showing and telling us more about these people as the 'action' progresses. The realistic discussion was excellent. Reg seems to be a real Dom and not a cartoon dom. I have my fingers and toes crossed that the story continues in this way. (The young man seems a bit subbie and hangs out at The Bookstore often, wonder what comes of that?) Looking forward to more.

I blew through this story just to see if she met reg again. We'll see in the chapter...