All Comments on 'Melvin's Magic Love Juice Ch. 06'

I was reading a novel before I glanced at this series; now I'm reading this series and glancing at my novel.

LOL! I laughted so hard a the leprechauns. Especially the one at the end. Loved the rest of the chapter too. Just as hot as the rest.

Love this story.

Melvin's Magic Potion has the making of an incredible read! Thank you for sharing your talent - for I'm enjoying every chapter!

JR Parz

I'm loving this series. Eager to read part 7!

...but what's with the new condition about the 1 of 2 choices he has to make? Sounds a bit 'fishy' to me.

I really want to produce "Melvin! The Musical", LOL. In the 70's, there were a few porno musicals on film. The X-Rated Cinderella is one I remember - Cinderella had a magical "snapping" pussy. She spent her days in the basement pedaling a machine that powered dual corn-cob dildoes for the evil lesbian stepsisters in the room above. Clearly, Mr. Bananas has an imagination just as wonderfully perverted, and it would be a shame to limit his vision to short stories.

Just love the Melvin series... when does he get to turn on his charm on the witch and get to fuck her ?