All Comments on 'Memoires of a Dom'

by Brutuslogan16

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FlyingThruLifeFlyingThruLife4 months ago

Hey, absolutely love the story. The buildup is amazing, the sex is hot, it's all great!

The only reason I'm going to leave 4 instead of 5 stars is because there are quite a few grammatical errors that take away from key moments in the story. For a first story though, you absolutely nailed it! Excited to see more 😁

benjohnson309benjohnson3094 months ago

Brilliant. Give us more

Brutuslogan16Brutuslogan165 months agoAuthor

Thank you for your constructive feedback!

Babsy830Babsy8305 months ago

Really like the conversational style o the narration.

Very arousing. Definitely a 5.

(Minor FYI: to don clothing is to put it on. To take off a skirt one can remove, shed, or doff it.)

Hope to see more of your work,

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