by Brutuslogan16
Hey, absolutely love the story. The buildup is amazing, the sex is hot, it's all great!
The only reason I'm going to leave 4 instead of 5 stars is because there are quite a few grammatical errors that take away from key moments in the story. For a first story though, you absolutely nailed it! Excited to see more 😁
Really like the conversational style o the narration.
Very arousing. Definitely a 5.
(Minor FYI: to don clothing is to put it on. To take off a skirt one can remove, shed, or doff it.)
Hope to see more of your work,