by Pippa76
An extremely sexy set of stories, well told. Too many rush into the hard sex, without taking time to build up the atmosphere. That's no good to me: let's face it, we all know about the permutations of what organ goes where. It's the arousing of a mood which marks out a good erotic story, and you do that very well. I'll look forward to hearing about the new chapter in your life.
I'm pleased for Alan
Disappointed for you
Pleased for John he still has you, the prize of this story!
I'm very much enjoying your stories. You write well. But I find you're rating system at the end of this chapter and a previous one depressing. I try not to do that to women. I grew up being judged and criticized by female members of the family. It's hard on ones self-esteem. Maybe that's what happened to Alan.