by Pippa76
Oh, Pippa, you really do like to tease, don't you, girl? Well, my dear, nobody does it better! I am so ready to see what haopens with Dave! Yes, I'll tune in next time, for another episode of "As the Pippa
Seduces." I guess it's obvious, but it's a treat for us all to be allowed to delve into your mind as the seduction slowly unfolds. I am so, so ready for Chapter 23! Five stars, of course
Oh dam another wait for the good bit, only 4 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Because of the wait.
Great story - even if it frustrates the hell out of your readers! I really wish you’d sort your single line paragraphs and capitalisation - it would just make readability so much better.
It's funny how the weather can play a part in bringing people together, even when it's bad! Pippa is setting a delicious trap for her prey, Dave, who seems to be amenable to being caught. The theater is a useful seduction device. It's the small things, like the looks Pippa and Dave give each other regarding the cleavage display, and John's reassurances to Pippa, that set the stage for things heating up. Good show!