All Comments on 'Memphis's Ranch Ch. 04'

by binderman91

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binderman91binderman916 months agoAuthor

Thank you for reading my series. Stay tuned to see what Memphis and Amanda does next. No incest but both sets of parents start playing as well.

Please give me a rating and leave me a comment. Tell me what you liked and what needs to be improved.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Not a big fan of slave stories. I'm torn between being invested in what I have read so far and the slave aspect.

erhco1952erhco19526 months ago

It had the beginnings of a good story until you introduced the slave element ....too bad you lost me ..

UncletoddUncletodd4 months ago

Great story just not sure on the slave part looking forward to see where you go with the story hopefully soon.

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