by mississippikat
Despite it's brevity I enjoyed this scene. I haven't read too many threesome stories quite from this angle.
I did find the term "honey pot" a bit distracting, but it wasn't enough to prevent me from enjoying your story.
I love your sense of adventure and the way you are able to convey even raw sexuality in a romantic and sensual way. Your characters are interesting and the attention to detail makes me want to know more about them. I think it's safe to say... I'm your biggest fan.... Keep it up!!!