All Comments on 'Mexico Mischief'

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lc69hunterlc69hunter8 months ago

cute, fun little story. Good daughter

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Fun little story, please check spelling. Erica’s motivation was a bit wonky at first, could’ve been helped with a little more back story. My daughter’s hot friend has hots on me is a classic erotica trope, but you need to set it up right and sell it well. You sold it well, but the set up was a bit short, IMO. Hope we can see further trysts between Erica and Dean, without the presence of Kelly. I think the action could get even hotter, now that they know each other! What other tricks does Erica have up her sleeves (or in her mouth or pussy?) Great work, please keep going!

Bargyn1Bargyn18 months ago

Editor would help!

Great story!

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