All Comments on 'Michaela Goes To Confession'

Very good work. It is so personal and real. Thanks for telling the story.

Uncluttered and straight forward prose. It tells a compelling story, too. Strong work. 5.

You've written a whole novel in two pages. I really liked the complicated, three-dimensionality of the characters. Sex plays a role in the story and in their lives, but other things are ultimately more important. I also liked the unapologetic way in which you present the importance of religion in their lives. You're a very good writer. The little details and conflicting emotions seemed very realistic and believable. Thanks for writing and sharing.