All Comments on 'Michael's Humiliation in the Pool'

Great story, but it HAS TO be a beginning! We're waiting for further developments, deepening Michael's shame and putting him in his right place, which is at the bottom (no pun intended here) of the line

Amazing first story! but what happens next for this baby dick!!!

Great story, loved the SPH!

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love it!!!

Hoping that you keep writing. Quality SPH stories are far too rare.

So now, what's going to happen to babydick? We need to know....

GREAT STORY! Love the humiliation!