- Lesbian Sex
- Michele
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"Yea MA'AM."
Did I really just say that? A well educated successful woman submitting to this little woman standing barely five feet tall. She has a strange power over me I need to please her anyway she wants.
Standing before her naked, head down as instructed, scared and excited why does this turn me on so much? I was hers to use, waiting for instructions, wetness growing between my legs with anticipation of what was coming. She had already pushed my limits to places I never thought I would go but I kept coming back for more.
After I arrived at her house tonight she order me to strip and I had been standing here for what seemed like forever. Naked, exposed for the slut I am, Michele just staring at me. I heard her walk out of the room but did not move I was order to stand here naked and would not move until told to do so.
"Look up pet."
I did has instructed lifting my head to see her standing there a realdoe jutting out in front of her. What a strange site Beautiful Michele naked now sporting a penis that looked so real.
"Like what you see my pet?"
"Yes MA'AM"
Walking toward me stopping to stand just in front of me holding her fake cock. "On your knees!" Following orders I kneeled before her her penis inches from my face. "Suck it pet" Taking her in my my mouth I sucked eagerly "Get it good and wet my pet." She was stroking my long red hair gently as I slobbered on her cock. I was so turned on serving her, so wet, I wanted so bad to please her so bad. "Deep throat my cock pet." Forcing my mouth down my until my nose was in her pubes. I gagged, saliva drooling out of mouth, Michele started moving her hips fucking my face violently, laughing loudly.
This is what I had become, a promising lawyer always in control a command of all the facts, now a worthless slut and loving every minute of it. Tears trickled down my face from gagging on her cock. My mouth was sore from her ruthless pounding but she showed no intention of stooping anytime soon. She pushed deep down my throat holding my head there "Look at me pet" I raised my blue eyes to meet her gaze staring down at me "You look so hot my pet - do you think it's wet enough?" Nodding trying to say yes MA'AM with a mouthful of her cock.
Releasing my head I pulled back drool dropping from my chin. "You did such a nice job pet." Stroking my hair I love when she did that.
"I'm here to please MA'AM"
"Turn around put your face in the floor and your ass in the air." I quickly did as I was told assuming the position. 'SMACK' "SMACK' I winced in pain, "Pull your ass cheeks apart, spread that ass for me pet."
"Please MA'AM, not the ass."
"Shut up!" I spread my ass for her scared what would come next. I felt her poking at my back door "Tell me you want it, beg for an ass fucking."
"please MA'AM fucked my ass please I'm a dirty slut please MA'AM fuck me." I heard her giggle as the phallic member made it's entrance inch by inch slowly entering me. The pain was excruciating, I screamed out, she went deeper and deeper. I felt her against my backside, she was all the way in, slowly withdrawing, I felt empty, then shoving back in. Her rhythm increasing the pain subsided into pleasure I started moving to meet her thrust. Moans escaping my lips giving away my pleasure at being fucked in the ass. "You may rub your clit pet."
"Thank you MA'AM" Reaching up between my legs to find my swollen clit I rubbed franticly. Suddenly I felt vibration, oh my God, what a wonderful feeling. Moaning wildly panting, I was free, I had given up control and love it. The first orgasm crashed through my body, shaking, trembling, Michele did not stop. Pounding my ass with out mercy would I even be able to walk tomorrow?
My second orgasm was more intense then the first the sounds coming out of me were unrecognizable. How did she know me better then I knew my self I love her, worship her, only want to please her.
Command me MA'AM I'm yours forever always. I'll do anything to please you, following every order to the letter, you are so good to me.
"Thank you MA'AM."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 2 years agoI've read a couple of your stories now, and I think of them as lost opportunities. It's not bad that your narrator wants to be humiliated and controlled, but **in a situation where one character is giving up all power** there can be no conflict between the characters, and thus no resolution without creating another sort of conflict, another plot.
And you begin with the question, "Did I really just say that?" and move on to the question, "Standing before her naked, head down as instructed, scared and excited why does this turn me on so much?" Either of these could have been the basis for an interesting conflict not between characters, but within the narrator. Yet the narrator doesn't even attempt to answer those questions. Okay there's painful anal, but how does the painful anal help the narrator answer her questions? You call the dildo a cock, but how does that help the narrator answer her questions?
You ability to write details into your sentences as if with a careful eye make it all the more disappointing that you're not providing anything meaningful. This fuck is like every other fuck the character ever had and ever will have: nothing changes, nothing grows, nothing is ultimately meaningful. You start the narrator obedient: "Yes, MAAM!" and end with the character... obedient.
There are sex words on the page, but there is no story. There are plenty other plotless stories on Literotica, and I usually don't bother to write a comment about them. But that's because the authors of those stories don't have your potential, don't have your facility with words. They're not disappointing, because those stories are often bad at **everything**. You're not. You have the potential to write a good story, but with your characters beginning and ending in the same place you make your writing ultimately meaningless. And with your talent, that is disappointing.
sweetentityabout 2 years agoshort and to the point,not really my cup of tea but will written..was kind of hoping for more back story, but this is good
lostopportunityabout 2 years agoAuthorI hope you enjoy reading my stories but I'm offering my erotic tales for free, sharing intimate thoughts and feelings, If my spelling errors upset you don't read me again, simple, acting superior correcting small errors says more about you then me. They are not a book report constructed so every word is perfect, I have a tumbling out style writing from emotion. I love feedback even the harsh comments from the grammar police "English must be your second Language" being the most cruel/funny. What would be helpful to acknowledge though is not only are some of these rules the grammar police hold so dear incredibly capricious, they’re also constantly changing. The thing that is oft overlooked is that as language changes, as it naturally does over time, the rules that govern it should change as well.
