All Comments on 'Mid day Quickie'

Interesting premise.

But sex is entirely matter-of-fact. No reluctance. No preliminaries. Just BOOM, right into it.

Lacks eroticism almost entirely.

Two stars.

One hell of a story with an almost got away with it escape?

Maybe not?

Best to service the wife now.

Your hands were 'wondering'? 'wonton' sex? So now I'm left with mental images of confused hands and two dumplings going at it!

I won't try to speak for others here but one thing I expect in an incest story is the reluctance and the reticence. "We can't, we shouldn't, oh my God it's so good!" If you're going to start a story in the middle of their incestuous relationship, you should at least mention how it got started, or how long it's been going on. Look, it wasn't a bad story, it just felt like a snippet from a bigger better story.