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All Comments on 'Midnight At The Lake'

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empressofrussiaempressofrussiaover 17 years ago
This one speaks to the romantic in me

The others are a little strong for me but if I could find a Master like that... AMEN!

Good story with only a couple of errors, mostly with tense. Nicely done.

ultimate_nerdslutultimate_nerdslutover 17 years ago
Definitely Nice

I liked it for the most part but I did notice a thing or two that could have been better... minor things that only someone as anal as I could really notice and go 'Hm...'

Overall wonderful though, I love your vocabulary!

Contest4JenContest4Jenalmost 13 years ago

Was very sweet for a D/s story. Very Nice. Cheers :D

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