All Comments on 'Mika's Awakening'

by Lunacracy

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greenparrotgreenparrotover 3 years ago

I think there was not enough rough stuff.

LunacracyLunacracyover 3 years agoAuthor
First time

You can't be too rough with someone's first time. They have to begin to feel the pain as pleasure before you can build it up. I probably could have made Dave more rough with Rose, but Mika's introduction to the lifestyle was the main focus of the story.

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