by MohanSingh
You have painted Ram as an easily replaceable, affectionless asshole. The dialogue is very formal and stilted. The story lacks passion between the characters, IMO.
Please write another part. I love the developing relationship between the two.
Well done! I love the tempo of your stories. Guaranteed to make the reader horny! Keep going my friend.
I love the sucking milk from her nipples part. Makes me horny for mine to be sucked. Please daddy!