All Comments on 'Mind Control Harem Ch. 04.5: Puppylove'

by ObedientPetgirl

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C_frommnC_frommnabout 5 years ago
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You read this far and its mindless? Maybe you should think of why you read so far to call it Mindless. That could have been said in Chapter 1. and you wouldn't have to go through the whole story. .Now why not bring other Races into his Experiment like a Black and make her call him master or and Asian and have her become a Dragon.

WhiteWomanBelongonthereKneesWhiteWomanBelongonthereKneesabout 5 years ago
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please keep write it, can you give him maids maybe a rich women and her daughter.

erosiawriter7erosiawriter7about 5 years ago
Great addition!

Your stories only get better and better.

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