All Comments on 'Mind Control Madness Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Nice followup

This is turning out not bad, but you really need to work on extending the story. These little chapters are annoying. If your must won't allow more, then simply wait a few days, and post the small chapters as one lengthier one. Otherwise, nice job.

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