Mind Writing Pt. 03: Shona

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'...fuckbuddy.'

'Right. Yes. And, if by some miracle I find a guy, I don't want there to be any guilt, or jealousy, or anything. Okay?'

I nodded. 'Perfect.'

'Okay. Good.'

'And, four,' I said, making her frown at me in a way that would have been typically maternal, if it weren't for her luscious curves spilling out from under that apron. 'I was serious about the free-use thing. If I drop in, two months after going to Uni, and Ali isn't here, or anyone else - I'm taking you. Agreed?'

I saw her quickly bite her lip, and nod.

'You might not be mine alone,' I mused, eating some of her perfectly-season eggs. 'But you're mine whenever I can have you.'

She let out a sigh, and I watched as her eyes drifted to the clock on the wall - before shooting wide.

'Fuck,' she said. 'I have work. Fuck.'

'It's saturday,' I said. 'You're a teacher.'

'I'm a tutor, too - we have weekend classes from nine - fuck.'

She started to pull together cleaned plates, but I stopped her. 'Get dressed, I'll clean up.'

Shona darted upstairs, muttering thank-yous as she went, while I rinsed everything down and set it up in the dishwasher. After a moment, she re-appeared downstairs, and we left together, sheepishly glancing at the neighbour's windows to see if anyone was watching. Gossip travels fast in this village.

Shona jumped into her car, and we exchanged a quick goodbye wave before she sped off. I watched, running my fingers through unwashed hair, and decided that I would go home, shower, and then run over to see Hannah.

As I jogged home, I watched as my dad's car drove past, speeding quickly out of the village.

I frowned, confused as to what was going on. When I got home, and saw mum quickly pull herself out of an embrace with some guy I didn't know, things clicked.

Neither of them had been home recently much. I'd been happily left to my devices, not bothering to think much about why. Mum's late nights and dad's long work trips all came into focus, but as stupid as I felt, I knew that I wasn't powerless here. My gift crackled at the back of my brain, waiting to act.

But first, I needed to know everything.


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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Keep going

This story is excellent I need you to keep going!!!! More much more 4 to whatever. Great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Um can I request that you write faster... I really love the story...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
No more waiting

The last chapter disappointed me because Shona disappeared in favour of the dreary Hannah. This latest chapter with Shona getting her due was everything I had hoped for. Thanks for taking up the story of the more interesting woman. Mature women have more experience and know how to get the best out of their man in bed, even if he's messing with her mind. Hopefully, she doesn't disappear from the narrative.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Super fun chapter

Great chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Excellent chapter as usual. You could have made this story a complete mess in so many ways and made it great in just a couple and you found great. That takes some serious talent and real thinking instead of going the easy route. I applaud and appreciate you going ahead and making the best story you could and I also truly enjoy the way you manage to have Jamie use his gift the way that would be most realistic instead of just abusing it wildly without a thought about the people that he would leave in his abusive wake.

I look forward to being able to enjoy your next installment.

J.D.

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