All Comments on 'Mind Writing Pt. 10: Christine'

Your story telling ability has drastically improved since inception of this series. It is so good I would consider buying an entire volume set of these stories made into a novel. Please continue, I feel I have found, finally, one more writer who doesn't just write literotica, but draws me into a beautifully crafted world that I could read until dawn breaks every morning. Thank you and your support for all the hard work. Outstanding.

Love it, can't wait for next chapter

Please continue this series what happens next?

I like your stories but I feel like this last one was an old story in place of what this 1 was supposed to be. Number 10 didn't continue from where 9 left off.

Please finish this story, I wanna know how this ends. And I didn't like what he did with Gabriella, felt wrong since they were making a kid out of this.

There needs to be more.

You named this chapter Christine and she was only introduced in the last paragraph. You obviously had plans.

Nice story! I would love to see it continued. ;-)

This is very disappointing, to end the series this way. I like your writing style, and that not every word in the story is about sex... but to just end it here, on top of titling this chapter "Christine"... that's just cruel. This is not how "leave them wanting more" works.