All Comments on 'Mine Ch. 02'

Story, A.. I haven't read Ch. 1, but I am guessing this can stand on its own merit.

You have a great ability to draw pictures with your words and make the reader feel.

I will be reading Ch. 1 so I can become familiar with the main character.

Thank you for sharing...

~Honey

I loved both chapters of this story you have such a way with words that makes the reader actually able to visualize everything i look foward to more from you!!

your best. I loved this one. You have such talent and such a way with words.