All Comments on 'Miracle Cream Ch. 02b'

And everything is a-ok after 5 years of torment

I think i can fortell the future. They are all in love now, Cory is keep making some jabs" Oh you made fun of me for five years" and then his family will keep repeating " We know we fucked up, but we will try" and tha will be a constant. Then a big shock Cody will find out about his parents messing up his deals in Nebreska and the like which will start a fire only for body to realise that he loves his family so so so much.

Not bad follow up chapter. Not as steaming hot as the first one and definitely less sex happened but what can you do if your MC gets stabbed and is in recovery. This tail is very similar to your 'Unbelievable' series many focused on rebuilding the family dynamic. Hope you put up the next chapter real soon.

Yes, i love how this story is taking off, I really enjoy there is more story and less banging going on, you write very well, and I really am looking forward to the next chapter.

Thx for sharing your work with us.

Better and better but I think the reconciliation is happening way too fast. They hurt him bad physically and mentally to the point he wanted to die, a used (if very sweet) car and a bit of sex isn't going to make things right. Not sold on reconciliation at all, I was pretty much expecting Cory to leave for awhile after the first chapter rather then staying with them, but still a good story despite in my opinion a rocky start. 5 stars.

Great story, as usual! 5 stars again. Thank you!

So instead of, litteraly, fucking all wrongdoings away you switched to violence and drugs?

Still an improvement!

So if you get rid of your familyfuckfests as well or tone the regular occuences down to every 3 stories there might be even variance in your Ic/Tab storytelling.

lets see how this story ends

Strangely all other categories your releas stuff has a lot of different plots and are far more exiting to read

Keep going. Not to sure i like the Zoe and Cassy thing but this is your story.

Not feeling this addition. Cory let go of his anger too easily. Too much forgiveness too soon.

It all just feels kinda flat. Cory talks about how angry he is. Everyone apologizes for the years of torment. They have sex and then rinse and repeat.

Noone appears to have any emotional growth as sex is basically the only thing any of em have in common.

I feel like the story would have worked far better if he left for college and this was set years in the future.

the same old issue remaining

Past transgressions are forgiven far, far to easy and/or quick wich always leaves a bitter after taste.

In this context the behavior changes of the evil 4 (aka the Fam) are also way to fast.

If they are still always thinking about his trouser titan because of the side effects of the Cream overdose it might be helpfull to mention it from time to time.

As it could be interpreted right know these women are more concerend about the dick and not that the child is more dead than alive

Which would be more than sick... on the other hand five years of child abuse by psychoterror...

Well, aren't you all going be in a world of surprise that thinks all is forgiven. Because really its not, and a story based solely on one emotion does not make for a good read.

After reading these 3 chapters it has evolved very quickly. It has been a intriguing story that I am looking forward to the next several chapters.

The doctor is way too intrusive. Also, how is Cory not getting as much as the first chapter. His barriers broke down way too quickly too. Complete 180 in attitude from chapter 1. He was using them for his pleasure and now he's this sensitive guy way too quickly

Absolutely perfect story. This is hands down the best story I’ve ever read on here. Keep going and don’t change your style.

Excellent story. Seems like there’s a buld-up to something big. Cory still hasn’t voiced that the family only started being nice, when he grew something they want.

Unless one or two of the Miller kids were adopted, there could be some trouble ahead… Cassy and her family know that Celeste had sex with Cory. What happens when they learn about Dayana and Zoe? And I kind of expect that more people will learn their secret. Durham isn’t West Virginia! They do live in the Bible Belt.

Another fantastic chapter. Wow. Disappointed here is no other one to jump to now. Guess we have to wait

In the comment section, and I noticed that you have 02c & 02d in the works. And yes, I do get impatient waiting on your stories. You just keep impressing me. Grouch6977

lease do more of this story i love it

Great job, as always!

Just gave to point out (and I know it's just fantasy fiction) even on an "off the books" private no fee basis. Delilah would lose her licence to practise faster than a snow storm in July (sic Ira Roderick). She cannot represent Cory's interest's when she is involved in a sexual relationship with 2 of his abusers, it's patently at odds with the doctrines of her profession. Actually it might be an interesting issue for Cory to call her out on. Also, while he is a student, Pixie might have difficulty getting accredited for the same reason if it all came out. I was disappointed

that for all Celeste and Jairo's tears they are back to swinging on his first night back, thought he was the most important thing to them,cemented her branding as a slut given she also fucked the doctor, in the hospital. I do love your stories, the characters humour always makes the moments of pathos more impactful. For god's sake let him have Dayana to himself, do not let this become an all family affair involving Jairo and the daughters it will ruin it completely, at least for me. Keep up the good work, I've loved all the stories of yours I've read.

They care more about his dick than Cory himself.. poor guy.. sad story.. i hoped for more revenge !

Nothing changed, the moment his dick goes small, they would abandon him..

Sure he is smart enough to know.. or is he not. 3/5

In chapter 1 Cory was this alpha guy getting his pleasure after being bullied. I have no problem with the love angle but it's happening way too quickly. He should still be using them for sex. Also it seems the sex scenes have dramatically decreased since chapter 1

The first chapter was great, with the downtrodden guy finally turning the tables on his family of abusers. Unfortunately, the story has rapidly gone downhill...

Reading about Cory taking pain meds and convalescing is tedious and depressing. Why are you focusing on details like nerve damage in what was originally an erotic story?

The neighbours are incredibly intrusive, especially the mother, who is violating all sorts of ethics by forcing counseling on Cory while fucking his abusers. All his flirting with "Pixie" is pointless when she's just using him as a living dildo and romantically involved with his sister. What happened to Zoe being his slut? She seems to have conveniently forgot about that as she rushes into a relationship with the annoying lesbian.

Cory also seems to have forgotten that he was driven to the point of suicide by five years of relentless bullying by his toxic family. The transformation from the bitter, resentful son in chapter one, to the guy cracking jokes with his parents is absurdly fast. People don't just forgive and forget that quickly.

Issues:

-the doctor acts completely unethically "its over 9000" - my suspension shattered!

-his creators (parents they are not!) swing ASAP? fucking around quite litteraly with him under heavy meds ?!?! - are they stupid or just asholes?

-peeked Ch02c since she makes the least sense... uhm is Zoes designed as an narcistic nutcase? impulsdriven to the point of selfdestruction - Pathetic bitch

I like your stories, I really do but sometimes the behavior of some Characters is so off the charts I never know if this is intentional or an oversight. Which ruins some otherwise good plot/conversations

Had so many expectations brother but it was simply so baad

Okaaay, now I know I’m in fantasy land when I read someone has a '69 Mustang Mach 1 429 Cobra Jet just sitting around and after rebuilding all the mechanicals, they’re willing to practically give it away. Hell, I KNOW people who would sacrifice their first born for this car!

Ohh… it’s funny though. Now back to the story

"We're going out tonight. We spotted a little club when we were shopping," Dayana said. Yeah you go have fun!!

I kinda thought Cass would be with him instead of zoey so whats going on here..? He lost 1 slut now.. hope he gets back to fuking sluts soon again

“ I was stupid and arrogant to think what we were saying wouldn't hurt you.” I would be fine with this if he hadn’t literally begged them to stop abusing him.. then it would be believable..

Its kind of boring the last 2 chapters him lashing out about the past 5 years and them saying the same thing over and over.. can we just get some distance from the family and get him back to fucking sluts like his mom’s friend’s again that was way more fun! Maybe his sisters friends this time.

His whole conversation with them while drug induced about that lame ass tv show is really boring/annoying! Im used to him shrugging them off! Damn i hate the drugs i wish he would ignore them again.

“Cory wondered if they had brought some strangers to the house to partake in their swinger lifestyle. “ oh come on the whole story is about the mother/parents having sex now.. move on to him having sex ffs.. also couldnt they have sex at the neighbors house instead of theirs…

“ Show Sam that ass, I know he'll like the view," Cory mumbled, "I know I do," he yawned as his left hand lingered on it.” its like he turned to a loving cuck or something come on man this is horrible! Sending her to the doctor and now to sam. He changed suddenly so much just because of some “drugs” ffs.

"So this isn't some ploy to buy me off?" Cory asked, his tone was clear, that told them he didn't trust their motives. COME ON man just ignore them! Go back to fuking sluts not this boring family that almost made him suicide.

We know why the mom did it because shes an idiot size fetishist but what about the other 3 they never explained..

"Alright, I'll give you all a chance. One chance. That's all you get, we clear," Cory said, with a pointed look“ whats the point.. you already know theyve been behaving themselves.. its clear as day.. just cause you couldnt get into a far away college? Sigh i so wish he wouldve stayed on slut mode.. ch1 was the best.

“But I thought you hated..."

"What, because she's a rude, one-track minded woman? She's still hot, you can't deny that," Cory said. Who the hell are they talking about? Im not following..also they all have openly sex with each other? Its so damn weird.

Bummer... story started out so good. Finally a Main Character who stands up for himself and makes his tormentors feels what they deserve... and now we are back, yet again, to having a cuck, who's totally OK with his parents fucking around while he's drugged to oblivion.

The Mom demanding he flirts with them, "using his own logic against him"... and he couldn't find a flaw in that? Really!? How about Cassy being the only one of those four bitches who DIDN'T torment him for five years, so of course he would be willing to flirt with her, but not them? And now the one he flirted with took his sister away, and he's just fine with it. Damn... disappointing.

Not following some of the dynamics between the characters that appeared in this chapter. On to the next chapter, hopefully, to be enlightened...4*

I love this one so much, I know I sound kind of pathetic, but I have actually teared up a few times while reading. I am glad that Cory has decided to give them a chance to see if they can somehow repair the damage they caused.

I could read this without the sex, not that I want to, but I could. All of Cory's family really seems to recognize what shitty people they truly are.

I do find it funny that after being stabbed in the abdomen losing a spleen, yet he is out of the hospital the next day, not a doctor but even I know that that is quite unbelievable. Not complaining or criticizing just find it kind of funny. Cannot wait to continue and see what is in store for this reader.

Still loving this story 5 stars

I have been thinking it would interesting if you made a alternate timeline version that Cory Died the night he caught his parents having sex with the neighbors and Dayana discovered he was dead when she woke up the next morning with blood all over his covers she didn’t notice the night before because she was trying her best not to wake him by climbing on the bed lightly and after he is placed in the morgue Ira’s cousin revives him and healing his wounds and giving him a new spleen leaving him scarless and because the blessing of the god that was apart of the miracle cream when he eventually earns the ability to become a incubus the magic from the cream causes a mutation of his DNA where he becomes a quarter God