All Comments on 'Miranda and the Boys Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Gets better and better. Can't wait for Miranda getting nude in public.

Manuele_69Manuele_69over 1 year ago

From my point of view many details are missing, both exhibitionism and sex scenes sound...emotionless.

You should describe how Miranda feels while she exposes herself, if she feels horny, if her pussy gets wet etc. same thing for the sex scenes.

LordFrostyLordFrostyabout 1 year ago

This is another story that isn't too bad but needs to be less about being the same as a porno movie 15 minutes into the story and she's getting fingered and the next day Fucking everyone. Try and learn about spelling and grammar, it's tiresome that every story I read has poor spelling and grammar.

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