All Comments on 'Miriam & Robert'

Excellent story. Really looking forward to the next episode.

Stewart

It is not tomato sauce it is gravy

should just chalk her up as fun, but not wife material. Divorce her, find a real wife.

Cannot wait until part 2

Many, many missing apostrophes.

Dr beulahthemick; I'm sorry but you can not leave it there, we need to know a lot more about Miriam and Robert's life with their neighbours and hopefully a few other friends. Good start, deffo five from me.

Great story, cannot believe the character who complained of lack of apostrophes.

Great story, read it twice. Poor long deprived Robert had to wait 25 years for Miriam's awakening but WOW.

So what happens next? You have created a couple of really cool characters who are ripe to go for more adventures. Looking forward to seeing them.