All Comments on 'Miss Amber'

by PxrnGuy

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The phrase is "taken aback".

YOU spelled it TWO different ways in the same story!

Speaking of which, you should have someone else write every one to follow; it's a good idea that doesn't need YOU to ruin it!!!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Great beginning. Please continue with another chapter. This could get very intense and extremely interesting!!!

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