All Comments on 'Miss A's New Play Thing Pt. 02'

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sissymissyctsissymissyctover 4 years ago
excellent job here

Very hot and easy to read. Looking for more soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Careful , Miss A ....

A lot of laws being broken here .

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
You've been watching

too many loser/beta/cuck vid's haven't you pornaddict. :-)

Must admit the training hypno video scene with the punishment vs pleasure thing, reinforcing foot worship is hot.

mrwidehorizonsmrwidehorizonsover 4 years ago
Great job!

Not a fan of findom but great story overall, 5 from me!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Beautiful

I love this story! I hope it eventually goes down a forced bi route too with the slave being forced to fluff Mistress’s lovers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Privacy gone

The poor sap/sub has no idea what he got himself into in this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Xxxxxxx

Wish I was her play thing and forced to drink her piss and take a severe caning my idea of heaven

foxeye1foxeye1over 1 year ago

Excellent and generally believable story with only a few grammatical errors, but certainly nothing to detract from the story. Certainly pushes all the right buttons for me. Would like to see a degree of sadistic cock torture to develop in future chapters, and would welcome some bisexual oral training, being taught to suck and fluff other slaves for either punishment or to sadistically amuse Misstress A. Overall, very well done, thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well, after the night that he had I am surprised that Alex remembers how to do anything at all. His cock must be so tender and beaten that I am again surprised that he is not in so much pain that he could walk or crawl at all. Oh, and did he crawl to the door before he left? If not, he will be punished. Oh well, after being kicked in the balls almost ten times he probably has some ruptured testicles and will be spitting up blood before too long. I like femdom tales from time to time and this is one of those times.

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