All Comments on 'Miss Bernie'

Another fine tale from one of the best. I enjoyed the evolution of Bernie and how she finally came to find herself. I look forward to more of your stories

This story was way outside my comfort zone BUT the manner and intensity you gave the story kept me reading and before I knew it was on the last chapter. The story has shifted my comfort zone somewhat a for a story to do that speaks well of the author. Thanks for the little journey

This story had me going from the start. I love the way you worked it to the end. Keep up the good work

I loved the story. I just wish it was a little longer or had a sequel to see what happens to the two main characters. I have read some of your other stories and have to pick some more to read in the near future.

I enjoyed this story very much. It is different from many of the Transgendered stories here. A good sex story is fun, but this was much more than that. Thanks for the read!

yes please continue this story

Excellently told; very sweet.

Just one minor point - "Columbia" is the capital of South Carolina (I grew u in SC).

"Colombia" is a country in South America.

That's one people get wrong so often; another that's more common in erotica is "discrete" (which means separate) instead of "discreet" (which means having discretion; knowing when to be quiet or to not see something).

I couldn't help noticing - i've worked as a proofreader - but it didn't detract in any way from my enjoyment of the story.

Thank you.

...are this intense, or bring such emotion from within. Can't believe I hadn't found it before, but I'm so glad I have. You've written a story that, while it doesn't reflect my life or history, certainly does reflect most of my hopes and absolutely all of my fears. I don't know how you managed to write from this perspective, but you have accomplished seeing the world from the view of a transgendered person incredibly well. I have owned a companion dog (a sheperd) trained to the level you describe and he saved my life after a drug reaction after surgery. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful story, and I will be watching for any new stories from you in future. Cheers! -- Josie

I added you as a favorite a very long time ago. I love a good romance. Being a veteran, I have an understanding of how that can affect you. There was not much about PTSD mentioned which affects most combat vets. He did say he put it in compartments. I also have some knowledge of transgender and I think you did a marvelous job. There does seem to be that niggling little question that bothers many of us about are we doing the right thing. And there are a fair number who decided as he did to stay both male and female.

This is a great story and ranks right up there with the others of yours I've read.