All Comments on 'Missed Mortgage Payments Ch. 07'

Chapter 7 in LW after 6 previous chapters in Non Consent? Maybe your fans will follow you over, but not many LW fans will go to Non Con to read the rest.

enjoying the story... less so the every other line narration by a different person... it is jarring and distracts from the storytelling... just imho.

keep the story coming, maybe flesh out (ahem,) the actual naughty parts a bit!

RA

Exciting little story. The point of views changing so much was a bit jarring. Maybe best to write something like this from an omni perspective. Just to be clear though, the only one performing any infidelity at this point is Tina. She is being unfaithful/cheating to her unknowing husband, while Danny is fully in-line with his wife and the mother of their kids being a slutty whore.

1*- not going to read one LW story with six previous rape chapters. Stick with one genre. I never ever read non consent stories.

I enjoyed the shift in narration style. Very creative.

I do agree with other comments that this series doesn’t belong in Reluctant. It’s more Loving Wives to me.

ONE STAR

interesting format... with each character getting a paragraph of response. A form of dialogue.

Self-delusion thy name is Danny.

Just curious. During the last chapter it was said that Tina did not do anal and and only took on the four protagonists one at a time. Now here you are stating that not only did she do anal at the party but also DP "while the groom fucked her ass" . . . .

A very interesting format for this chapter and very well executed. Again I have to say that with the exception of chapter 1 none of these stories should be in non-consent. You hinted at the beginning that this is a true story and it comes across like it is. Very good work.