by LustyLee77
loved it, thank you so much for the story it was wonderful. look forward to reading more from you. respectfully a fan in Texas
I loved the story very much, but it did go by very quickly. You should spend more time on each moment and explain it all in more detail, really let us know how the characters are feeling and thinking.
Don't rush the story :)
Very intricate and well written. Got me VERY excited. Would like to see more. A+!