by WhiteKnight79
WOW! Love it! Would certainly not want to live it, even with my submissive fantasies. Over the line hardcore but a great story.
At least mine. Fantasy, sure but that’s why we are here.
You've just taken this story way off the scale from any sort of believable fantasy. It's just far too extreme that anyone would submit themselves to it.
What is a good series could be excellent with some editing to correct usage/spelling sloppiness. (I didn't say to stop though.)