by JillRayna
In real life I'm an extremely alpha male with four daughters and an adorable but extremely placid wife twelve years younger than me. I am always, and am always expected to be 'in control'. My wife and I have tried role reversal in the bedroom, she understands perfectly well my need to relinquish authority as a therapeutic sop, but she can't really carry it off. Our quasi serious acting wouldn't do justice to a 70's porn flick and the session always disintegrates, first with smirks and embarrassed giggles from her, so that I start feeling a bit humiliated, and that IS NOT what I am after. In a way she is in control, she'll manipulate herself back into the submissive role she prefers by exasperating me into putting her over my knee in an explosion of mock rage(but genuine frustration). Need someone to write the story of my fantasy to show my Blue how it goes. Not sure this male chastity belt thing is going to go my direction though. Intelligent writing, thanks...Mancelt
This is well-written although it strains credulity. I can't imagine a guy, on a first date, being interested in putting on a male chastity device, unless he has advertised in the personals indicating a desire for fem-dom. Of course, he can always buy a $25 bolt cutter and snip the lock off, carefully of course, so he can certainly end things if they get boring. Now the politeness thing which the author (through the story's heroine) emphasizes. It is not polite to publish a story that is part 1 of several (or many) chapters without putting "Ch. 01" in the title. Some readers (including yours truly) prefer to read the entire story at once, rather than one part today, another in 3 days or 3 weeks, or 3 months, requiring a re-read of the preceding chapter(s). Just asking for some common courtesy here . . . thanks for writing.
I liked you story and liked that the newbie/inexperienced Top/Dom was a little uncertain.
The interesting part for me will be her growth and her imagination as you develop the characters and the scenarios. I hope you (and her) are going to be really wicked!!
I liked you story and liked that the newbie/inexperienced Top/Dom was a little uncertain.
The interesting part for me will be her growth and her imagination as you develop the characters and the scenarios. I hope you (and her) are going to be really wicked!!