by deathlynx
A really enjoyable story, DL. I hope you'll continue their 'adventures'.
and a great read, lynx. I was interested in the Dhase tales since last Halloween. Glad to read that there will be sequels. Good luck in the contest.
I don't usually read much Sci/fi but this was an interesting story. It would be a cool way to die if there is such a thing. Good luck to you in the contest.
I loved the magical quality to this. Lovely story, very appropriate for valentine's day. And a great use of words to bind the reader into your spell.
A great story. Look forward to reading more of their relationship.
The creativity is amazing. Mixed with the sense of romance, I'm pretty sure I'm in love with your story!
-Jaz