All Comments on 'Mixed Family Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

This is so hot and wrong, I love it. I would've preferred he fucked and spanked the mom one more time, and during that session, demand the mom convince her daughter to fuck him, and she agrees in the middle of her own orgasm. Great premise, please write more!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I know this is the writer's story and they can write it however they want, but the shortcoming to most of these kinds of tales is, common sense tells you, at some point the victim says enough is enough. They either get help from someone or plan vengeance on the captor. This chapter had that feeling, with her backed into a corner, except nothing happens. So unlike a normal story with ups and downs, twists and turns, most of these just keep adding humiliations until the writer runs out of gas. It seems obvious mom or the kid being bullied, would be seeking revenge at this point.

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